Electric, the sky shines for a second.
Blink and it's gone.
The jagged spikes of unleashed nature.
How powerless we are to control what we can't understand.
Minutes pass,
The sky again explodes and illuminates the dark void of question.
So much power turned into beauty,
The beauty of a world gone mad.
There are some things that we will never be able to tame,
No matter how hard we try,
And those are the most beautiful.
Watch the light flashes in the sky,
Dancing to a melodic lullaby.















Comments
I'm already a fan of your work.
The only thing I'd suggest is perhaps a change in this:
"The sky again explodes and illuminates the dark void of sky."
What distracted me from the flow of the poem was the use of sky twice.. perhaps rewording it or choosing a different word?
I can't write poetry for my life, it's just a suggestion
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...*wave* o___o;
kaylee
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Theres no sensation to compare with this
Suspended animation, a state of bliss
Cant keep my eyes from the circling skies
Tongue-tied and twisted just an earth-bound misfit
i love it
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Theres no sensation to compare with this
Suspended animation, a state of bliss
Cant keep my eyes from the circling skies
Tongue-tied and twisted just an earth-bound misfit
cool
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::cant be close enough;;unless I'm feeling your heartbeat::
means a lot though
thanks
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Theres no sensation to compare with this
Suspended animation, a state of bliss
Cant keep my eyes from the circling skies
Tongue-tied and twisted just an earth-bound misfit
We so have to do that again sometime, and I'll use my magical powers to bring back the lightning.
We'll invite Calvin and Hannah again, too.
Kaylee
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Theres no sensation to compare with this
Suspended animation, a state of bliss
Cant keep my eyes from the circling skies
Tongue-tied and twisted just an earth-bound misfit
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